HAIKU 103

Using the breathing
like a needle: in and out,
sewing awareness.
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2 thoughts on “HAIKU 103

  1. Lovely analogy! Would you consider rewording line 2 to say
    “darning needle, in and out. or dies darning imply too much patching and mending rather than mere existing?

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