Haiku 121

You stars in heaven:
sky jewels. Teach me please to 
shine through the darkness.
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2 thoughts on “Haiku 121

  1. I wonder whether this haiku would be truer to form if it read “please teach me to” This is because I am tempted to pause when please follows teach and this upsets the haiku rhythm (count).

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