Late spring I visit my boy at his Saturday job.
I’ve waited since Christmas for this
moment. Not wanting to cramp his style.
At first he doesn’t notice me, so I can watch
as he serves a customer bread and manages the change.
Clean cut. Confident.
Then when he sees me and we share a secret smile.
I want to vault the counter
to hug him. But I wouldn’t let on. No.
Just two of them are serving
this customer river – a woman and
my son. Yes, he’s my son.
Reaching the service bay I ask the woman
for a bacon sarnie and a cup of tea
and hide surreptitious glances
behind her to where his sixteen-year-old back,
in light grey hoodie, attends now to the dishes,
smoothly stacking the industrial dishwasher.
And, as I sit down, he takes over
frying the bacon and asks quietly from the griddle
‘do you want it crispy?’
‘yes I do, I do, yes,’ I say, losing parent into customer.
And when he brings out the tea
and the crispy bacon which is
delicious, I want to shout to the other customers:
‘Look: my son made this!
my son, my son.’
But instead I munch and watch,
covertly, as his six foot, designer-clothed body
works. Choosing and moving between tasks.
And as he wipes the table beside me
I digest his new face: calm, purposeful.
Adult.
Then, leaving a tip, I pass slowly
through reverse lettering,
back, onto the busy street
where the last sun rays are slanting towards sunset,
and I find myself unable to
think about the rest of my day
Oh, this is so touching! Just how I felt when my boy started his Saturday job!
This is just so beautiful. If only all children were revered in this way.
Lovely
The best Wyon. I love tihs one it perfectly captures your love and pride and this special moment. The line “losing parent into customer” had a good ring and the one “and pass slowly through the reverse lettering…” is especially evocative and charged with double meaning. Love Jane
sometimes its hard to believe that even children,…. OUR little children grow up too.
its lovely!
This was really lovely. To be secretly proud of a child achieving on his own is wonderful. Thanks for sharing